1、分点一：分层证明
　　basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from_______ is that__________/ first and foremost;
? ? ? on one hand_________， on the other hand_________;
　　besides/ what’s more/ in addition;
　　first of all/to begin with/above all;
　in the second place/in the second instance;
　　last but not least/in summary;
　　2、分点二：举例证明
　　further lending credence to my position is that____________
　　/i can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型比方)
　　/ a case in point is that(不是很典型)________，…..some expert pionts out that…
　　/take … in instance…
　　/according to the investigation conducted this year indicates that…/
　　some statistics expose that…
　　一句话总结比方：as a result，偏重句/倒装句/表利害的句型/不和证明假定没有会怎样。
　　3、让步段：
　　agree or disagree： admittedly，_____，
to some extent， may directly or indirectly ____ /has its undeniable detriments.
　　for instance， _______
　　however， the valuable merits of_______? considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./
　　(经典正反比照规划)
　　二选一：admittedl

y， bb also has certain merits which deserve some words here. for example， ____
　　however，bb 的缺陷或aa也可以做到. compared with aa， (which 可以总结一切利益或关于bb的一方面， )it pales.
　　4、结束段：
　　therefore， due to the above mentioned reasons， which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不可了用)， i reinforce my stand point that…
　　5、改写标题
　　only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________;
　　only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________;
　　and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______
　　or
　　it is a that…;it is a that…;and it is a that…(不好写或显得负担就不要了)

言语规划用词表达
1、根柢句型
a.因果
　　on account of/owing to/due to+ n
　　for the reason that/as/since+语句
　　it is due to____that
　　eg：it is due to his persistence and perseverance that he eventually reached his acme.(偏重句)
　　derive/arise/stem from来历于
　　eg：his success derives from his persistence and perseverance.
　　scribe a to b 归结于
　　eg： his success can be ascribed/attributed to his persistence and perseverance.
b.条件
　　a serves as a catalyst for b(our further success)
　　if/on condition that/provided that/as long as________
c.让步
　　despite the fact that/regardless of
2、经典句型
a.倒装
　　only via(by/through /with/when/after) __ do/did/can we__
　　eg： only after going to the beach of hawaii will i know aboutamerican typical type of spending leisure time.
　　hardly/seldom/scarcely can__
　　eg： hardly can we imagine a world/our life without/devoid of
　　so +adj+主谓倒装+that__
　　not only 主谓倒装 but also…
　　eg： not only should education prepare?? children to compete
　　not only do people care their economic needs，they but also want to meet their spiritual needs.
　　on no account 主谓倒装(决不….)
b.偏重
　　it is/was….that/who(m)….
　　限制性副词probably/directly or indirectly/ to some(a large) extent
3、经典中的经典
a.排比
1、it is tourism that gives me the opportunity? to know the culture of this dynamic， robust?? and alive country.
2、it is computers that make our life diverse，convenient，dynamic/ vibrant， without which our life would probably pale.
3、a/which needs to be/in this way， a can? ?be readily accepted， respected，appreciated and advocated.
4、only via university education can we have? systematic knowledge concerning arts and science.
　　only via university education can we know the essence of symbiosis and collaboration.
　　and only via university education can we meet the demands of society and make our future success inevitable.

作文中的有些新颖表达
a、认为(尽量避免的表达，以下例句同，不再重复阐明：
i think/i believe/as far as i am concerned)
1.别人认为：assume， argue， contend，? ? maitain， hold the perspective that…
2.我认为： i am inclined to the view that…? ? (最初引入自个观念)
convinced that…
i aware that… (比照弱)
i cling to a belief that…
b、不一样人有不一样观点
(different people have different opinions)
people’s perspective diverge on this controversial issue.
there is no consensus among people concerning this controversial issue.
c、举例(for example/for instance/let me give you an example)
1.a fitting/ telling/ apt/ striking example is that…
2.a case in point is that…(口语常用)
3.further lending credence to my position is the example of …(倒装)
4.this can be aptly/ well exemplified and illustrated by the case of+n.
the fact that + 语句
the following case
5.i can think of no better illustration than the example of…， who….(最高档)
6.when it comes to music talent， eminent individuals ranging from mozart to beethvoen come immediately to me.?
7.to illustrate this， we need no look further than the case of……(举例)
8.imagine/ visualize/ picture/ suppose……
d、沉浸，喜爱，上瘾(少用具体多用笼统)
i am invariably fascinated/ captivated/ enchanted with/ by…
hardly can i resist the temptation of sth.
be obsessed with/by …
e、数据引证
statistic figures show/ manifest that…
many surveys/ investigations 闪现 that 越来越多的 universities have 注重 the credit system， which peobably would 带来不好的呃印象.(中文从一下中选词)
闪现： manifest/ illustrate
注重： place a great
/ considerable emphasis on
attach great importance to (不必换词)
on no account can sb. ignore/ turn a blind eye to sth. (倒装)
越来越多的： a increasing number
带来不好影： exercise an unpredictable/ unforseable consequence(不好的成果都用这个) upon
f、正反证明
it is not difficult to imagine that if……
it is modern technology that makes our life simple， healthy and dynamic/ vibrant/ fantastic/ active/ alive， without which our life would probably pale.
hardly can i imagine the world without the fascination of…… which……
g、可是(引出事物的不和)
on the contrary/
conversely/
by contrast
h、利害及其影响
利：merits/benefits/advantage
弊：drawbacks/risks/disadvantage
弊：
exercise an unforseable and unprediactable
/ adverse/ unfavorable
/ deleterious consequence on…
undoubtedly and undeniably sound an alarm to sb.
put a enormous pressure upon
put a potential and probable threat on…
adversely affect…
undermine
利：
1. exercise a far-reaching influent on…
2. … undoubtedly serves as a catalyst/enzyme for…
3. play a(n)irreplaceable/crutial/indispensable role in…
4. lay a solid foudation for…

词汇的替代
1： help
典型例句：ill help you 。
替代语 accommodate/assist/ avail
e.g： ill endeavour to accomodate you。
2： helpful
典型例句：sth is helpful (to sb)
替代语 conducive/ time-honored 年代赋予的/ do credit to our forbears 继承前辈的优良传统/ assisting
e.g sth is conducive to sb
3： show
典型例句：as it shows in the picture
替代语 betray
4： think
典型例句： i think —- —-
替代语deem
5： ugly
典型例句： xxx is ugly
替代语 hideous
6： by the way
典型例句： by the way，…
替代语 incidentally，…
7： because
典型例句： xxx because xxx
替代语 in that/in as much as
e.g： xxx because xxx
8： consider
典型例句： we must consider xxx
替代语 allow for
e.g ： we must allow for xxx
9： much
典型例句： there has been a much increase in the world population
替代语 there has been a drastic increase in the —–
10： about
典型例句：it is about 250 times of that
替代语 it is approximately —
11： buy
替代语purchase