今天给大家分享一下石雷鹏老师的历年真题范文~

英语一小作文
51.directions:?one foreign friend of yours has recently graduated from college and intends to find a job in china. please write an email to him/her to make some suggestions.
you should write about 100 words on the answer sheet.
do not use your own name in the email. use “li ming” instead. (10 points)
?【破题思路】
?首段：寒暄+目的
二段：提建议
尾段：展望
?【参考范文】
?dear sky,?
? ? as your friend, i am quite delighted to hear that you intend to find a job in china and today, i am

writing to make several suggestions.?
? ? ?first, it is advisable for you to seek a job in beijing, the capital city of china, which is characterized by the abundant employment opportunities. in addition, compared with others, you, as a native english speaker, have more advantages in teaching english and you have been working as a part-time teacher during the past years. thus, i suggest that you?try to apply for a teaching position in training organizations.?
?? ? i deem that your excellent teaching will bring chinese students great efficiency, arouse their passion for english learning and help them speak english fluently.
yours sincerely,?
li ming
?亲爱的思凯：
? ? ?作为您的朋友，我很高兴听说您打算来中国找工作。今天，我写信提点建议。
? ? ?首先，你应该来北京找工作，北京是中国的首都，其突出特征就是就业机会很多。此外，与其他人相比，作为母语是英语的人，您在教英语方面具有很多优势而且过去的这几年，你还一直兼职做英语老师。因此，我建议您可以试着在培训机构申请教学岗位。
? ? 我相信你出色的教学将会给中国学生带来效率，唤起他们对英语的热情，并 助他们流利说英语。
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您真诚的
李明
part b
52.directions:
write an essay of 160–200 words based on the pictures below. in your essay, you should?
1) describe the pictures briefly,
2) interpret the implied meaning, and
3) give your comments.
write your answer on the answer sheet. (20 points)?? ?
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简析：本文可以从以下多个角度入手展开：坚持做自己喜欢的事情、自信、独立思考、不盲从、父母正确鼓励孩子等；但如果只写传统文化，未涉及上述内容，就偏题了。
?【破题思路】
?首段：描述图画
中间段：阐述寓意
尾段：建议号召
?【参考范文】
?this is a simple but enlightening cartoon, in which there is a youngster, with great disappointment on his face, complaining, “i want to learn the traditional opera, but my friend tells?me that it is boring.” then, his father encourages him, “what does matter is that you like it.”(it is significant for you to do what you like.)
the father’s encouragement, apparently, can be associated to the significance of sticking to one’s dream. to my understanding, successful figures are characterized by their various merits, such as their optimism, confidence, diligence and independent thinking. however, in reality, so many young people, like the boy in the picture, are often affected by others’ opinions and even give up what they really want. this phenomenon is particularly worth concerning?for the reason that they pay excessive attention to what others say, ignoring the importance of adhering to their own thoughts. in fact, this negative state of mind has constituted an obstacle that hinders their progress and growth.??
i, as a college student, deem that it is of great necessity for us to do what we like, which can bring us power, arouse our passion for striving and help us eventually achieve dreams. everyone should bear in mind that it is our perseverance not others’ comments that leads to our own success and a promising future.?
?【参考译文】
?这是一幅简单但有启发性的漫画。图画中，有个年轻人，很失望地抱怨说：“我想学戏曲，但朋友说这很无趣。”然后，他的爸爸就鼓励他，说：“你喜欢，才是最重要的。”
?显然，这位父亲的鼓励能联系到一个人坚持梦想的重要性。在我看来，成功人士的突出特征就在于他们身上的各种优点，例如乐观、自信、勤奋和独立思考。然而，在现实中，很多年轻人跟图画中的小男孩很像，他们经常受到他人观念的影响甚至会放弃自己真正想要的。这种现象非常值得关注，因为他们过于关注的是别人说什么，忽略了坚持自己梦想的重要性。事实上，这种消极的心态已经构成了一种障碍，阻碍着他们的进步和成长。
?作为一名大学生，我认为我们很有必要去做自己喜欢的事，这会带给我们动力，唤起我们对奋斗的热情渴望， 助我们最终实现梦想。每个人都应该记住：引领通向我们成功和美好未来的是我们的坚持而不是别人的评论。