原标题：【老雅最新范文】2019年全国考研英语大作文解析与高分范文-坚持的意义

52: directions:

write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. in your essay, you should:

1) describe the picture briefly;

2) interpret the implied meaning, and

3) give your comments

write your answer on the answer sheet.

老雅高分范文及解析

part

01

the picture shows two friends on their way to the top of the mountain. one of them sat on the step, looking exhaustedand depressed. he told his

companion that he was too tired to continue and he decided to stop there, while his friend said, encouragingly, “don’t give up! we can go on after a short break!”

本段描写图画。描写图画时应尽量突出图画的关键细节，包括：（1）画中人物的关系；（2）画中人物的动作和表情；（3）画中人物的意图；（4）画中人物的语言。本范文使用了一些表示面部表情的形容词，如exhausted and depressed, encouraingly等，以增加描写的生动性。

exhausted 疲惫不堪的

depressed 情绪低落的

encouragingly 鼓励地

part

02

the meaning of the picture is obvious. if our life is like a journey up to the mountain top, we are sure to encountermany difficulties and problems, both physically and mentally. we may feel tired and sometimes we may feel likegiving up. yet, there are people who will persist even when they are equally tired. always energeticand optimistic, they will keep telling themselves to carry onuntil they reach their destination.

本段解释图画的意义：在人生的旅途中，有些人会放弃，而有些人会坚持到底。解释图画意义的时候，需要将图画的内容提升一个层次，但这部分不需要表达自己的观点。

encounter 遇到

feel like doing… 想要做……

persist 坚持

energetic 充满能量的

optimistic 乐观的

carry on 继续，坚持

destination 目标

part

03

in my view, giving up halfwayis the worst thing to do in the world since it wastes much of our time and energy, and it also erodesour confidence. before doing anything, we often have to spend time getting prepared and getting started, but if we cannot stick toit to the end, all these efforts will become useless. what is worse, if this happens again and again, we will no longer believe that we can accomplish anything at all.

这部分表达观点：中途放弃是最糟糕的。原因有二：浪费时间和精力，同时消磨自信心。这个部分需要学生表达出自己的观点并对其进行简单的论证。

give up halfway 中途放弃

erode 消磨；腐蚀

get started 启动；开始做

stick to 坚持

accomplish 完成

part

04

as the picture tells us, in many cases, what we need is just a little rest when we get tired. the point is that

we should overcomethat physical and mental exhaustion, stand up and continue our journey.

这部分结合图画对全文做一个总结。如果没有这个段落，似乎问题也不是很大，但有这个段落，显得更加完整。

in many cases 在很多情况下

overcome 克服

exhaustion 疲惫

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