2025上外考研备考,英语言语文学专业写作题典例分析与技巧(2020上外考研报录比)
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上外考研英语言语文学写作题典例分析、写作技巧
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2024考研、2023考研、2022考研这几年上外很注重作文题查询,每年等于都是考了三篇作文题。英语归纳里边一篇300字支配的记叙文、一篇不少于400字的谈论文,以及写作与汉译英类别里边一篇不少于500字的谈论文。早年根柢也都是查询两篇作文,一篇记叙文(单个年份也是谈论文)、一篇谈论文。因而,同学们备考进程中也要特别注重作文有些的备考哦,多多练手和堆集写作材料。以下以高译课程学习资猜中的经典作文题为例,以学生写作操练作为说明材料,来扼要谈谈作文如何破题与成文:
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例题一
【标题】
write on the topic of “something that inspired me” of no less than 300 words.?
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学生操练:
it was a bitter winter morning with heavy wind blowing. owing to the necessity of attending an important activity, i had to leave home early. whereas my alarm went wrong, i did not get up early as expected. as a consequence, i was forced to get hurried. feeling the urgency to buy breakfast fast to save time, i tried my hardest to finish the whole purchase as quickly as possible.
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however, when i turned to leave the stall, some imbalance occurred and my breakfast fell to the ground losing the grip of my hand. the porridge was all over the area, which displayed a disgusting scene. as soon as i came to borrow some clean tools to clear the dirty spot, a sanitation worker hurried to rescue my dilemma. feeling sorry and embarrassed, i apologized to the worker for what i had done. so i stayed there to clean the mass with the worker. during the process, curiosity pushed me to learn more about their job. we chatted a lot about the routine of the work, which prompted me to know that they would get up so early at about four or five in the morning no matter in summer or winter, while they did not receive much salary and gain some people’s respect. furthermore, the worker also lamented the misconduct of some young men who threw rubbish along the way sometimes, which really increased their burden. hearing their hard work and strenuous pain, i paid far more respect for them and became embarrassed and guilty for my accident causing a hassle to him.
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that incident of the conversation with the worker gave me a lesson of paying more attention to our behaviors in order to decrease the hassles for them. also, it inspired me to become more solicitous about the job of cleaner workers and understand them more.
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【作文解析】
这道小作文的标题归于非常经典的出题作文,而若调查上外近年的小作文查询方法可以发现大都小作 是半出题的方法,尽管考题中不会清楚捆绑表达方法就是记叙文,可是从标题的指涉性来看,是鼓舞学生写记叙文的。
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万变不离其宗,小作文的材料与方法无非就固定的几种,只需要从基础的作文题初步操练、打磨,不只可以使表达愈加流通与美丽,也可以愈加活络地在考场上调用自个的作文材料,参加高译这边的课程,直到考前都有教师一向为你答疑与批改、打磨写作。
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回到标题,启迪了叙说者的“something”,当然这可所以一件实践的物品,也可所以一个作业。但在有限的文章中要体现出写作者的功力,破题时先要构思内容,以小见大,从小事 ,从点到面,见微知著;再思考最佳呈现的方法,感染读者。
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可以从切身详尽的调查 ,写稀松往常缺反应其时社会抢手论题的作业,如年青人的躺平文明、性别对等、关怀留守儿童与老人等自个调查到的新闻并实践遇到的作业,较为可以感悦耳。在内容过关的情况下,再留心行文逻辑与表达,小词的运用(小作文这一点特别重要),便能拿到比照好的成果。
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从学生的操练来看,内容选题是不错的,从对环卫工情面绪的改动体现出他的生长,一些小词的运用以及表达的多样都还不错。但就全文的全体规划来看,进入主题(与环卫工人相遇并交流)稍显推迟,直到第二段的中心才相遇,前面的烘托过于负担,后边关于情绪改动的心路进程与环卫工人的描写较为单薄,全体上有种虎头蛇尾的感触,假定能调整会非常好。
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例题二
【标题】
(以2021英语归纳中高文文真题为例)write an?essay of comment?of?no less than 400 words based?on the passage about?“stereotype”…?
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【学生操练】
comment on stereotypes
stereotypes have aroused bitter controversy among a great many of professionals in some academic areas. those who hold optimistic perspective towards stereotypes maintain that they make it possible and convenient for us to deal with a certain set of circumstances according to the existing experiences. but those pessimists think otherwise, for stereotypes also have us neglect individual differences, and thus lead to our incorrect decisions. taking the views from both sides into account, i am inclined to agree with the later one.
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to begin with, stereotypes exert a peculiar illusion on many people. for city dw
ellers, the quiet life of the country appears to be more fascinating towards them and is regarded as a means of freeing them from city strains and anxieties. such idyllic pastoral scene as the twittering of birds, the fresh air and the sunlight glinting on the trees and flowers has always been appealing to people in the town. however, this is only part of the picture. let us suppose that you are living in a village where everything is pleasant but poor telephone signals, poor traffic services and poor selection of goods in the shops. can you stand staying there for a long time? i am afraid that quite a few of people might not do so, for we live in a society where we cannot do without phones and wifi. from the instance above mentioned, we observe that it is our stereotypes about country life that enable us to consider it superior to city life.
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in addition to the illusions brought by stereotypes, the hindrance to the nature of something novel should also be taken into consideration. everything in this world keeps coming and going, never to come to a halt. a situation that is being regarded as absolutely reasonable may be overthrown and prove to be absurd one day, as it did in the case of copernicus who has found out that the earth and some other planets revolve around the sun at the center of the solar system. in copernicus’ time, churches had firmly believed in the theory that the earth is the center of the universe, for the bible told them so. but with the advent of astronomy, certain scientists including copernicus transformed their stereotypes on the earth gradually. in this way, stereotypes serve as obstacles to the development of science.
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to conclude, though stereotypes are inevitable in our daily life, considerable reasoning should be thoughtfully taken when we come to them. in the light of this statement, a mind of dialectic is essential for us to break a common situation where stereotypes prevail.
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【作文解析】
上外的两门专业课均会考到写作,只是字数需求会纷歧样,因为专业课一为归纳考试,会考到高文文与小作文两种方法,并要肄业生可以在规则的时刻内写完,需要平常备考中多多练手和堆集写作材料,高译这边在考前与平常都会有许多的作文操练,以及守时的查验。专业课二写作与汉译英关于写作的字数需求会更高一点,当然考场上时刻也会更足够。
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相同,从方法与内容两个方面来对标题进行思考。关于谈论文,一般会需求同学有自个的观念与情绪,情绪的选择并非要非黑即白,可以在往常进行写作思路的逻辑练习是再好不过,在考试中要展示出的是思考才能,也就是思维的层次性,以及表达才能。
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这一篇学生作文操练质量较好,关于标题中的第一种观念 行了驳斥,再撑持第二种观念,全文不管是从写作逻辑仍是表达来说都是较为流通的。
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但仍要留心:
其一,行文中短少特性,最初段与结束段有套模版的嫌疑,关于这类疑问要许多堆集学习好的、有特征的最初段的写法,并总结出有自个特征的写作办法。
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其二,尽管证明的逻辑没有大疑问,但在内容上缺过分陈腐,援引的事例最佳可以用到多种证明方法,联系当下时局抢手,一起也引经据典(经典英语文学作品)。这两个疑问都是需要在长时刻的深耕与学习中才干够不断打磨与实习出真知。
以上从两道经典例题的说明中让同学们对高文文与小作文的写作有初步的感知。英语写作亦同翻译,咱们作为非母语者表达时总会有林林总总的习气需要改动与习气,在这个不断打磨思路与实习的进程中,最重要的就是带路人。
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可以参加高译的课程,在写作的学习中,不只能获得最新鲜与真题方向共同的许多学习材料和专业辅导,还可以在与教师的一起谈论中培育树立好英语写作底层思维。预先跨出与教师交流的第一步,信赖下一个考上上外的同学非你莫属!
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