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五、盛行文明：网络/手机

directions:　　

write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. in your essay,?you should

1 )describe the drawing briefly.

2 )explain its intended meaning,?and

3) give you comments.

图像

猜测范文

the internet?has become increasingly prevalent in the recent years. as is subtly illustrated in the picture above, there is a?keyboard of a computer and a mouse which is connected with our beautiful blue planet.

like tv, the internet?benefits people hugely. with?the internet, the home will become a library, a school, an office and even an entertainment center. all transactions, from banking to shopping, can?be performed online?and all information, from train schedules to discount-price goods, will be available by pressing a key.?in addition to providing us?with?a great many services,?with the internet, the computer enables?us to communicate directly with people all over the world and with information and resources worldwide. however,?despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by?the internet,?the changes it brings could lead to potentially adverse consequences. for instance,?as nearly all activities could be conducted at?home, we could all become hermit-like, never feeling any need to leave the house.?this would be?especially unfortunate?for?our children?for they?become so addicted to?the internet?that they might never be exposed to social interaction.

unquestionably, the challenge of?the internet?means we all should consider how we can control it, so that it won’t control us.

参阅译文

迩来几年，互联网现已变得越来越广泛。如上图所示，一个电脑键盘和一只鼠标联接了咱们秀丽的地球。

像电视相同，互联网给我们带来了许多优点。有了网络，家可以变成图书馆、学校、单位，甚至是文娱中心。一切的生意活动，从处置银职事务到购物，都可以经过网络来结束；一切信息，从列车时刻表到打折产品目录，只需按键就可以得到。网络除了给咱们供给许多效能之外，它还能让咱们用电脑直接与世界各地的我们联络，获得世界各地的信息和本钱。可是，尽管网络既前进功率又带来便当，但它带来的改变可以会构成潜在的不良成果。例如，因为几乎一切的活动都可以在家中进行，咱们都可以过上山人的日子，不再觉得有必要脱离家。特别关于咱们的孩子来说，这将是很意外的一件事，因为他们会沉溺于网络而有可以不愿参加社会交际。

无须置疑，网络带来的应战标明，咱们大约思考如何去控制它，而不是让它来掌控咱们。

亮点词汇

the internet互联网?

prevalent盛行的?

in recent years这些年?

subtly奇妙的?

illustrate描绘

keyboard键盘?

mouse鼠标?

is connected with联络?

planet星球 benefit有利于?

hugely无量地?

library图书馆?

entertainment center文娱中心?

transaction生意

perform完成?

electronically电子上?

schedule时刻表?

discount-price打折的?

goods产品?

in addition?to 除了?

a great many许多?

facility设备?

obtain获得?

directly直接地?

all over the world世界各地?

sources本钱?

worldwide世界规模?

despite尽管?

efficiency功率?

generate带来?

lead to 致使

potentially潜在地?

adverse负面?

consequence成果

for instance例如?

nearly几乎?

activity活动

conduct进行

comfort舒畅

hermit-like山人般的?

unfortunate意外的?

especially特别?

become addicted to沉浸于?

be exposed to 进行?

social interaction社会交游?

unquestionably毫无疑问地?

means意味着

consider思考

control控制

道长点评

这篇文章尽管组织平衡，显得不偏不倚，但从言外之意、从优缺陷的比例中仍是可以察觉到作者的观念。例如在说到网络带来的便其时，作者用了四个语句，而且比照具体甚至举了比方；而论及其副作用时，只用了两个语句，而且非常笼统。特别是最终一段作者观念愈加理解：疑问不在于网络给咱们带来应战，而在于咱们如何去控制它，而不是让它来控制咱们。综上所述，任何作 要有一个中心观念。

经典句型

1.on the one hand, there is no denying that?internet?is currently one of the most efficient media used for interpersonal communication.?一方面，不可以否定网络当前是用于人际交流的最高效前言之一。

2.as a college student, i?get on line every day to discuss news with other people on bbs, to study english by registering for web courses, to chat freely through msn messenger with my friends. 作为一名大学生，我每天上网与别人在bbs上谈论新闻，经过注册网络课程来学习英语，凭仗msn和我的兄弟们免费谈天。

3.but on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to?internet?to maintain?face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues. 但另一方面，许多人招认他们太沉浸于网络而不愿与兄弟和火伴坚持面临面触摸。

六、人生道理类：机缘/应战
directions:　　

write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. in your essay,?you should

1)describe the drawing briefly.

2)explain its intended meaning,?and

3)give you comments.

图像

?

猜测范文

as is?vividly revealed in the photograph,?two players with masks are playing fencing with tenacity and quickness.?we are informed that?“it is an opportunity as well as a challenge”.?some people believe that?opportunities are the result of coincidence or random chance.?others argue that?they exist all around us and that our attitudes determine whether we exploit an opportunity or forfeit it.

one factor that plays a role in?determining our opportunities in life is random chance. some people are born with certain opportunities.?for example,?prince william would not be second in line to the british throne if his father had been anyone other than prince charles. in addition to the element of?chance, a large part of opportunity?stems from?individual attitudes and mindsets. opportunities?often exist all around us,?waiting for those with the courage and enterprise to seize them.?finally, many of?our opportunities?are the result of?hard work and perseverance. while utilizing one’s natural endowments and taking advantage of existing chances are?important, new opportunities can only be created through effort and action.

in sum, i believe that?the number of opportunities each of us?has depends on a combination of factors, including?random chance, individual mindset, and the degree of one’s perseverance.?to make the most of our lives, we must?capitalize on chance, maintain an optimistic attitude, and work hard to achieve our goals.

参阅译文

如图所示，两位带着面具的运建议正在以坚韧的情绪和强健的身姿击剑。文字阐明闪现：“是机缘亦是应战”。有些人认为机缘只是偶尔偶尔，另一些人认为机缘就在咱们周围，它是不是能被使用完全取决于咱们的情绪。

咱们遇到机缘的一个很重要的要素就是偶尔。有些人天然生成就有优胜的条件。例如，威廉王子假定没有查尔斯这个父亲，他不可以能变成英国王位的第二继承人。除了偶尔要素，机缘还有很大一有些来历于自个的情绪和心态。机缘一般就在咱们周围，等候那些有勇气和作业心的人捉住它们。最终，咱们的许多机缘源于勤勉和持之以恒。尽管充分使用一自个的先天条件和捉住当下的机缘非常重要，可是只需经过本身尽力和实践行为才干创造出新的机缘。

总之，我认为咱们每自个具有多少机缘取决于多种要素，包括偶尔、自个心态以及自个的尽力成都。为了让咱们的日子愈加充分，咱们有必要捉住机缘，坚持旷达活泼的情绪，尽力作业以完成咱们的方针。

亮点词汇

reveal闪现?

photograph相片?

player运建议?

mask面具?

fencing击剑?

tenacity坚韧?

quickness灵敏?

opportunity机缘?

as well as也是?

challenge应战?

coincidence偶尔?

random随机的?

chance机缘?

argue认为?

exist存在?

attitude情绪?

determine抉择?

exp

loit使用?

forfeit损失?

play a role发扬作用?

determine抉择?

certain某些?

for example例如?

prince王子?

throne王位?

in addition to除了?

element成分?

a large part of许多的?

stem from源于?

individual自个的?

mindset心态?

courage勇气?

enterprise作业心?

seize捉住?

perseverance持之以恒?

utilize使用?

endowment先天条件?

take advantage of使用?

create创造?

effort尽力?

action行为?

in sum总之?

depend on取决于?

combination联系?

degree程度

capitalize捉住?

maintain坚持?

achieve完成

道长点评

考研写作现已12次查询人生道理类论题，别离是1994年“友谊”、2003年“温室花朵经不起风雨”、2004年“结束又是新起点”、2007年“自傲”、2008年“协作”、2012年英语（一）“旷达”、2013年英语（一）“选择”、2016年英语（一）“榜样”、2021年英语（一）“行为”、2021年英语（一）“困难”、2021年英语（一）“坚持”、2021年英语（一）“习气”。

经典句型

1.those born into upper class families would not be able to attend the world’s elite schools or travel on private jets if they had been born into ordinary or impoverished families.这些出世于上层阶层的贵族子弟假定身世于一般或贫穷家庭，那么他们必定无法进入世界名校，更不能乘坐私家飞机旅行的。

2.after a stock-market fall, some people have the long-term strategic thinking to invest in devalued stocks, eventually earning profits that enable them to buy a car or house.在股市下跌时，有些人具有长时刻的战略眼光，出资一些价值降低的股市，究竟赚到钱，可以买下一辆轿车甚至一栋房子。

3.without years of rigorous training, however, none of them would have realized their potential or have had the opportunity to participate in the olympic games.可是假定没有经过多年的严肃练习，他们无人领会识到自个的潜力，也不会有机缘参加奥运会。

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